Written Language Sample
Cameo
Learning Intention: I am learning how to use appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo writing.
Success Criteria: I am able to find and highlight adjectives and verbs in a cameo and explain why they work.
I am able to write sentences with appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo.
Task: To write a poem about autumn, using appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs.
Remember to: Punctuate your work correctly.
Use careful spelling and sounding out
WINTER
Winter blows its cold icy breath everywhere.
he early morning frost icy crunch and white covering the green grass.
The loud wind howls in the freezing air like a stray dog hungry for a bone.
Tiny snowflakes flutter down to land on the frozen ground,
covering everything with a white sparkling blanket.
The trees become bare, brown bones standing like statues admiring the view.
Heavy rain falls from the dark grey sky, pounding against the soggy ground.
Chilly bitterness in th e air, winter is here.
Here is my writing
Autumn - DRAFT
The heavy wind blows trees over. Crash a big tree fall down. and. Nearly hit my house. Late in . The morning
I Raked the leaf. Into a big pile. I looked At. The levf change color
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Here is my writing
Autumn - Published
The heavy wind blows trees over. Crash! A big tree fell down and nearly hit my house. Late in the morning I raked the leaves into a big pile. I love to jump into the colourful leaves. I like looking at the leaves changing colour.
